Maybe I need to bone up on my reading
Another quote from Amazon,
I have seen Twilight referred to as vampire romance with training wheels. Well, this Twilight fanfiction (rewritten with new character names) is erotic romance with training wheels, a helmet, and shin pads.
Keeping to all of the God-awful stereotypes set by the vampire series, I found nothing to like here. The protagonist has all of Bella Swan's bad traits: a ridiculous level of clumsiness, a good dose of bitterness, and a downright nasty attitude towards women with blonde hair. The hero is a stock-standard Romance Hero. A place-filler for readers' ultimate Fantasy Man. This means he is not particularly compelling, and not particularly memorable.
Too weak to satisfy erotic romance fans, and too out there for the conservative Twilight crowd, this has to be the most over-hyped book since the original with the sparkly vampires.
Add to that the poor writing, repetition, and use of British English by American characters (but hey, American historical romance writers are guilty of Americanising Britain all the time - maybe this is payback!), there's really little - if anything - good to say about this book.
If this is your first taste of erotic romance, you might be surprised in a good way. Everything is exciting the first time round. But once you're able to swim without those floaties on your arms, go check out a better erotic romance writer - Cherise Sinclair is my top pick.