Opinions needed on my new website

[PocketRocket]

Ok Guys , I've been building a new website . If I can do it anyone can. Sheezzz it was just last year I learned to copy and paste .seriously.. I know my site needs some changes and corrections . But give me your opinion. What I did was put it together so I could get my dealershp set up with the companies..
Thanks for any input...http://wattyouneed.com/home
OH and I did check with 2 tone ( James) before posting this..
I appreciate it !

 

[twotonevert]

I dont see the link bro.

Edit: fixed it for you.

 

[lil charlie]

yeah...what website

 

[danath 34]

the way you were talking, I was expecting the worst. Its not too bad. Could maybe do with some 'more'... i.e. more images, custom link banners and such... though too much can quickly turn into a bad thing...

 

[Commuta_Busa]

The only format thing that really sticks out to me is the top red thing that gets cut off by the picture thing. Why not let the red top border go all the way across and have the picture start below it...

 

[busabeast]

looks good so far...

 

[Sous]

The only format thing that really sticks out to me is the top red thing that gets cut off by the picture thing. Why not let the red top border go all the way across and have the picture start below it...

Agreed, also the bar at the bottom seems to be over powering the area with very little information on it. I would try to scale it down a bit.

Punctuation is key on something like this. There are many grammar errors in the text. Down to even the spacing between sentences needs to be consistent. For example:

Welcome !! Lucky You ! This site was built for the working class that bust their butts working for a living and like the same adrenaline pumping life-style as myself. I'll be giving honest gear reviews, money saving tips, health tips. So if you're like me and like Guns, Motorcycles, Martial Arts, Health topics, etc Then explore our site.!!!!

You have spaces between "welcome" and "!!". Do you really need two !!, if not then one will do just fine. At the end of the paragraph you have a period and several !. In the third paragraph you have a sentence end, then another start right after that with no spaces.

Read it out loud to yourself and check for flow. Also, be sure to raise your voice in an exited manner when ready sentences that are followed with !. Microsoft word with spelling and grammar checker can be a life saver in something like this.

One more quick thing after looking at it again, on the right side you have "What we do". Stick with "Watt" as that is your gimmick or catch phrase for the site.

 

[Lycan]

where do I start..

too hot outside..good luck meng!