opinions needed

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by KappaSigBusa, Sep 17, 2009.

  1. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    I'm working on a shirt idea and this is what I've put together this morning any input would be appreciated. thanks in advance.
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  2. DEMMYM

    DEMMYM Donating Member Registered

    I like it. :thumbsup:




    Are these going to be for sale and if so you got a price in mind.
     
  3. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    haven't thought about selling them but I'll work something up once I have a final version if people want some :bigsmile:
     
  4. Dino

    Dino VERITAS - AEQUITAS Donating Member

    I like it, but the lettering seems washed out or something.
     
  5. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    I was kinda going for a worn washed out look with the whole thing. maybe i should play with some different colors for the lettering and see if that helps. :thumbsup:
     
  6. dadofthree

    dadofthree Seasoned Beef Donating Member

    You've come to the wrong site to get an opinion. :laugh:
     
  7. BBB

    BBB Busa groupie Donating Member

    I'd like to see the word Hayabusa isolated with a white background and either straight or italicized (keeping the same splatter effect). I would be interested in a purchase myself. Perhaps adding a kanji to the shoulder area or somewhere? :thumbsup:
     
  8. MET

    MET The Watcher Moderator

    Nice concept, needs a little work.
     
  9. flynlow

    flynlow Registered

    Or even where the gator or polo rider would be. Like what your doin and possibly want one too.
     
  10. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    thanks for the input I'll be reworking it tonight at work I'll post some updates :thumbsup:
     
  11. SnowBeltChamp

    SnowBeltChamp Registered

    I think the word would look better at the bottom and arched the other way that way you can read it easier seeing it would be mostly in the white part of the t shirt... best of luck

    edit: or lower the bike down an inch or so then lower the wording down an inch or so into the white stripe area of the flag... just my 2 cents
     
    Last edited: Sep 17, 2009
  12. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    ok i've done some playing around with it and this is where i'm currently at
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  13. Lurch

    Lurch The milkman cometh!!! Donating Member

    I like it very much. But then again most people say I am not nromal.:whistle:
     
  14. lavinrac

    lavinrac Lav's towin service. Donating Member Registered

    That would be because you arent normal... ::25


    oh yeah BTW like the shirt.
     
  15. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    that would be on the back with a kanji on the front left breast
     
  16. F=MA

    F=MA Donating Member

    That was going to be my suggestion. I'd also like to see some variation in the font...the "bleeding a" is a little too repetitive.
     
    Last edited: Sep 17, 2009
  17. Phil96

    Phil96 Tail Gunner Donating Member

    If I thought I wuz normal, I would go out of a window::4
     
  18. BBB

    BBB Busa groupie Donating Member

    Abbey Normal? ::25

    Love the new design! I want it on the back of a hoodie and maybe on a beanie. :thumbsup:
     
  19. KappaSigBusa

    KappaSigBusa Registered

    since
    i tried a few other fonts and played with positioning how is this?
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